Monday, 6 March 2017

Colour

Red I am a juicy apple.I am a sweet strawberry. I'm a crab shell. I am a colour bright and dark. I am lava. I am a apple, also bumpy and soft. I'm loud and quiet, an iPad case.


6 comments:

  1. I like when you said I am a sweet strawberry instead of saying I am a strawberry it is very descriptive��

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  2. Hi Isaac. I like how you used different combinations of the same thing like using apple twice but for different perpasis.

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  3. I like the sentences that you have used like I am a sweet strawberry. But I think you should make it longer because If you look at my colour poem it is a lot longer.

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  4. (Isaac) I really liked how you discribed lava because it really suites your story.
    ( From Finley)

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  5. I like the words that you have used in your colour poem like, l am a sweet strawberry so maybe you can use them in other writing.

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  6. I get what you mean by how you are an iPad case it is that you are strong and that is so true.

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