I like when you said I am a sweet strawberry instead of saying I am a strawberry it is very descriptive��
Hi Isaac. I like how you used different combinations of the same thing like using apple twice but for different perpasis.
I like the sentences that you have used like I am a sweet strawberry. But I think you should make it longer because If you look at my colour poem it is a lot longer.
(Isaac) I really liked how you discribed lava because it really suites your story.( From Finley)
I like the words that you have used in your colour poem like, l am a sweet strawberry so maybe you can use them in other writing.
I get what you mean by how you are an iPad case it is that you are strong and that is so true.